Friday 4 November 2016

Literacy T4 W4 Reflection

This week for my literacy I have been doing my Myths and legends we had to make a Monster or an alien out of wet pant in the cromebook and then write about it like what it is and heaps of other information like that. Here is mine.Screenshot 2016-11-03 at 10.29.11 AM.png

5 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Oliver. It is Megan commenting. I am scared already. What is this creatures name? I would like it if you put in your writing as well as the drawing. Poroporoaki (goodbye)

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  2. Kia Ora Oliver IT is Summer in your class. Wow that is one cool monster Is really like the colour of it. Something for you to work on is you should tall as the name ,age, what it like,dislike and a little paragraph on what is dose. I really like the monster well done.

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  3. Hi Oliver it is Lincon here from room five at Karoro School. I like your picture. It is scary and awesome. You could put in what it likes and what it hates to do. It would be nice if you wrote about your creature.Every thing else is great, awesome and really cool. Is that app that you used good to use?

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  4. Kia ora Oliver, it's me Marshall. Wow thats a awesome monster. But what is the name? anyway good job on the monster. Poroporoaki (goodbye)

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  5. Kia Ora Oli, it's Kaleb here from Mamaku 3. Well done!! What is your monsters name? Next time you could maybe write something about your monster. Anyway all aside great blog post. Kia Pai.
    From Kaleb.

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