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Hi there Oliver, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.I like the way you said everything that you did in chronological order and that you included pictures.This reminds me of when I go to Hanmer springs for holidays. It is really fun there right?Next time you could add a bit more detail into what you did and who you were with other then that it was a great post.Would you go again with those people if you could?Kind Regards,Abby.
Hi Oli, its Your buddy Zaza I really like your camp slide because it was detailed. Did you enjoy tree climbing and the hot pools? My favourite was the hot pools. Great job I enjoyed Camp too!Good job!!!
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi there Oliver, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said everything that you did in chronological order and that you included pictures.
This reminds me of when I go to Hanmer springs for holidays. It is really fun there right?
Next time you could add a bit more detail into what you did and who you were with other then that it was a great post.
Would you go again with those people if you could?
Kind Regards,
Abby.
Hi Oli, its Your buddy Zaza
ReplyDeleteI really like your camp slide because it was detailed. Did you enjoy tree climbing and the hot pools? My favourite was the hot pools. Great job I enjoyed Camp too!
Good job!!!